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 Prologue - "To Live Forever"

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SimEm

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PostSubject: Prologue - "To Live Forever"   Prologue - "To Live Forever" EmptyJanuary 25th 2009, 9:16 am

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PostSubject: Re: Prologue - "To Live Forever"   Prologue - "To Live Forever" EmptyJanuary 25th 2009, 12:31 pm

I just read it again. I love it, Em! Such pretty writing. Lots of questions and hints of things to come.

I never noticed how pretty the hag's eyes are.
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue - "To Live Forever"   Prologue - "To Live Forever" EmptyJanuary 26th 2009, 10:17 am

I really like those eyes. I'm not sure where they're from, but they're a pretty murky grayish-green, just what I had in mind. I'll have to post a picture of her when she was young. I think she still has wrinkles in the picture I have of her as an adult, but she was actually really pretty once.
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PostSubject: I love it already!!!   Prologue - "To Live Forever" EmptyJanuary 27th 2009, 10:48 pm

First of all, I'm so glad you're sharing Penelope's Journey with us here.
Secondly, I really like the simple, but appropriate layout you've got set up for it. It works well for this tale's time period. Don't you think?

Now on with the show...

What a great start! You write so intelligently and your words are so well thought out, Emily.
I'm already intrigued by Onyx and can not wait to learn more. I like your story already!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Prologue - "To Live Forever"   Prologue - "To Live Forever" EmptyJanuary 28th 2009, 1:26 am

THAT was intriguing!!! Yup

I love the pictures and the I have to agree with Sugah - the way you wrote the prologue is so well done.

I can not wait to learn more of this hag with the old face and the beautiful eyes............................

Thanks for sharing your story with us Em! Send Flowers
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue - "To Live Forever"   Prologue - "To Live Forever" EmptyJanuary 28th 2009, 7:25 am

Wow, Em! This prologue was EXCELLENT! I see you changed the name, I like “To Live Forever”, great choice! Bravo!

All your pictures were wonderful, and your writing is very captivating! I love the way you set up this story, it goes very well with its contents!

Even though the hag is all wrinkled and barely has any hair, she is still a handsome woman! She must have been GORGEOUS in her youth!

You did a marvelous job decorating the hag’s kitchen! I love the garlic and herbs hanging on her wall, great details! Yup

That is so Kool that the taverness was a townie and you added her to your story! She looks great!

OOOO! I LOVED the slightly distorted reflection of the hag in the mirror, AWESOME effect! Send Flowers

I look forward to reading more of your story Em, I am definitely very intrigued! Great Job
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SimEm

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PostSubject: Re: Prologue - "To Live Forever"   Prologue - "To Live Forever" EmptyJanuary 28th 2009, 10:14 am

Thank you so much, everyone, for all of the wonderful comments. You're making me excited to keep working on this so I can have another update soon. I took some more screenshots and so far I have 9 pictures for the next installment. I'm not sure how many pictures I need to take still before I can upload again. It depends how I decide to break it up.

I made that layout a long time ago, when I was just writing it and not simming it yet. Luckily the pictures fit between the borders just perfectly.

"To Live Forever" is just the title of the Prologue. I seem to have better luck with chapter by chapter names so far. And the mirror effect was just an accident. I didn't edit it at all, it just looked that way in game. I'm glad you liked it though!

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