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PostSubject: Story Discussion and Updates   January 31st 2009, 2:09 pm

Chapter one - Fall's Loneliness has now been posted.




After the birth of her baby brother, Victoria's life changed for the dramatically. Her father stopped being attentive, her older brother developed anger issues, and her mother became preoccupied with the baby. Soon Victoria felt alienated in her own home, and struggles to muddle through childhood while her family falls apart.

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   January 31st 2009, 3:32 pm

LOVED, LOVED, LOVED, THE FIRST CHAPTER! Blow Kiss

My dear friend, this first chapter was everything I had imagined and hoped for, IT WAS AWESOME!!!!! Bravo! Send Flowers

I left you a comment on your blog my dear! Crush

YOU GO GIRL!!! Yippy

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   January 31st 2009, 6:43 pm

Stopped being attentive is an understatement!

I'm so excited that you're finally getting a chance to start this story. I remember you talking about it a long time ago. I look forward to reading it.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   January 31st 2009, 10:08 pm

Thanks so much, guys! I value your support. Thank you for all the wonderful comments! They keep me going.

You're so right, Em. This one has been on the board for over a year. It was actually the first sim story I was going to do, but then I pushed it aside to work on BLD. It's about time I got around to telling it, lol.

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PostSubject: BRAVO, Scribe Faery!!!   February 4th 2009, 11:37 am

I just finished reading the first chapter of EFHIS - Fall's Loneliness - and it was sensational!
Everything was so beautifully photographed and the story is written so incredibly well.

You did a most EXCELLENT job, Ari. I left you a comment on your blog.

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 4th 2009, 4:23 pm

Thank you, Sugah! That really makes my day! Send Flowers

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PostSubject: Chapter 2   February 11th 2009, 4:39 pm



How has Victoria's life changed now that she's a teenager? You'll have to read
Winter's Cold Embrace to find out!

Mature audience only

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 11th 2009, 5:47 pm

OOOO! OOO! OOOO! I'M THERE! LOVE her freckles!!! OOOOOO! Got to go read, see ya!!! Crush Gold

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 11th 2009, 6:51 pm

OMG! I just finished reading it... FREAKING FABULOUS! Bravo! Send Flowers My dear I'm sorry I got a little carried away with my comment on your blog, but you just freaking cracked me up! I LOVED this chapter girl! Crush Great Job

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 11th 2009, 8:27 pm

Oh no you did NOT get carried away on my blog!! I LOVED finding that huge comment! It makes my day! Thank you ever so much, wonderful friend for the awesome words! Send Flowers

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PostSubject: Bravo, Scribe Faery!!!   February 12th 2009, 10:10 pm

WOW! Another awesome chapter!
I left a comment on your blog. Like Z, my comment is a small novello, but I simply had so much to say. Giggle

Fabulous, fabulous, fabulous! Great job. Keep up the wonderful writing and sensational screenshots, Ari. Bravo!

Fantastic

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 14th 2009, 8:23 am

Thank you so much, Sugah! I will check out your comments and respond. Thank you for all your support!

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 14th 2009, 11:06 pm

Ari -

Your storytelling is so captivating and vivid. Your photos only add to the richness of your stories. I've enjoyed these two chapters very much, although the content has been heart wrenching at times. That is a gift of a powerful storyteller - that you can make your readers actually FEEL something. YOU have that skill M'Lady.

Thank you so much for sharing your updates here at the forum and being PART of it. Kiss

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 15th 2009, 11:54 am

Awww! Thank you so MUCH, Hunter! Your kind words are very inspiring! I'm so happy you like Victoria's tale. It is not a happy one, to be sure. Thank you for reading it and allowing me to share my links and updates here!

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 15th 2009, 2:11 pm

Oh Ari......you are correct - it is NOT a happy tale. I think though that those are the stories I'm most attracted to because life is NOT always Tulip Fields and Sunshine. I think these kinds of stories lead us to aspire to have happier, richer lives. I think they're also inspirational to those who might be in the same situation as your characters.

Your stories are always welcome here Ari and I'm glad you share your updates here with us.

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 16th 2009, 8:28 pm

ThanxJewel

I'm glad to have a happy home here.

I never seem inspired to tell a completely happy story. It would get boring pretty quickly, I think. I like to really torture my main characters, lol.

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PostSubject: Chapter 3 - Winter's Shadow   February 27th 2009, 4:10 pm



Victoria meets Shane again and tries to get her mother some help, while Clay has a meltdown.

Winter's Shadow

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 27th 2009, 11:20 pm

Sorry

I feel for Victoria so much.

Excellent chapter Ari........and I didn't notice the walls being down.

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 28th 2009, 8:26 am

I'll have to go back and comment on your blog further when I get the time, but I didn't notice the walls being down either. You should stop pointing out your mistakes, because most of the time I don't notice until you say something, then I want to go back and look for it.
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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 28th 2009, 8:54 am

Thank you, Hunter! Send Flowers

LOL - you're probably right, Em. I was just so mad at myself because I should really know better by now.

Thanks for reading, both of you!! Blow Kiss

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 28th 2009, 9:00 am

Bravo! Send Flowers Another AWESOME chapter my dear friend! Kiss

And the shame of it all! Stunned To commit such a rookie mistake at this stage!!! How will you ever be able to live this down!!! Embarassed

LMAO You are too cute my dear! ROFL You know I got your back, check your e-mail! Blow Kiss

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   February 28th 2009, 10:43 am

I'm glad you said that, Z. In the mood I'm in I was about to tell you to bite me. But you helped me out a lot, and I love you for it! Thanks

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PostSubject: My apologies...   March 23rd 2009, 1:08 pm

Ari, not long before I left for E. Texas last week, I DID get to your latest chapter of EFHIS.
I was just about to leave a comment on your blog, when Snacky arrived home and I had to get offline to go somewhere with him then.

Unfortunately, I never got back to EFHIS to leave some positive feedback, as shortly thereafter, I had to get my crap together to leave for my mom's.

Please know I absolutely LOVED it. The story keeps getting better and better and I mean that.
I completely agree with so many of the positive, wonderful comments that were left on your blog about your latest chapter.

I look forward to the next one. Keep up the awesome work. EFHIS has already become an engrossing Sims tale that I look forward to keeping up with.

Send Flowers Bravo! Send Flowers

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PostSubject: Re: Story Discussion and Updates   March 23rd 2009, 1:38 pm

Ah, thanks, Sugah! The compliments really mean a lot and help keep me going. I'm coming along with chapter 4. I only need a few more pics, but having a hard time wanting to get them done since I'm having so many performance problems with my game. Slow, then slower, and sometimes freezing and crashing with all my big lots - which includes Victoria's house. I should have made her a poor girl living in a shack so I could use a small lot, lol! But I'll get the next chapter posted someday!

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PostSubject: Chapter 4   April 7th 2009, 5:23 pm



I finally got chapter 4 completed and posted. In Spring's Warming Kisses, Victoria gets to escape the tedium of her everyday life and go out and have some teenage fun. How will she get along with Shane?

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